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Hey by MikomiKisomi Hey by MikomiKisomi
"What are you staring at?"

Another drawing of Chernoa, I just love her design *A*

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Chernoa:
:bulletpink:She's sometimes bossy and moody
:bulletblack:She likes to get her way
:bulletpink:She can kick ass with her fists
:bulletblack:She acts all cute and sweet but can be deadly
:bulletpink:Apples are her weakness!

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Here we go! You ask for a critique, you get one. ;)

Let's start from the head down!

Her hair is lovely, very long, shiny and textured. Great job on that by the way, texturing is a lot harder than it looks! I can see just by looking at it that her hair is silky and smooth.

Her eyes are beautiful and quite detailed. Whenever I look at this picture, I am drawn to them because of the difference in color. Which is a good thing! Better that the eyes are drawn to hers rather than drawn to her feet or something. My only suggestion here is that they be placed just slightly lower, but that could just be your style. It doesn't matter!

The clothes are also quite detailed, something I like. Their design is also really nice! But one little thing: there's a small breeze, right? Perhaps the skirt can move in that direction just a little bit, like the hair.

Anatomy here is good, but the hand placed on her hip is a bit off, along with her thighs being a bit too thick for her hips. That could just be her body type, but it seems a little off to me.

All the colors are good here! I commend you for that! :D

Regarding shading: I recommend making some of the shadows sharper, not quite so soft. A good place for that would be the space on her neck just under her head and the area on her legs where the skirt is casting a shadow. Like I said, those could both do with slightly sharper shadows.

Looks like I'm done! One last thing though...HER EARS ARE SO FLUFFY AND ADORABLE
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Yay, I'm writing another critique! :)

ok, first of all, love the character itself. Her clothing is very detailed and it's a really cute outfit. However, her skirt just seems a little stiff.

I love how you shade as well. It's really well done! Her hair is well shaded and highlighted as well :D

Anatomy is pretty good. However her thighs do seem a bit too thick for her. And her hand also seems to be a bit off.

I also love her eyes! They are extremely detailed and are a bit out of the main color theme, which is good in this case which really draws in the audience. However...her eyes seem to be a bit too much to the left?

This is a really good piece of art! And i love her ears! Keep up the good work! :)
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Ashpyr Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ASDFGHJKL;;;;;QWERTYUIOP{;;;; :iconamgplz: THIS---- THIS!! toogoodforwords
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:iconmikomikisomi:
MikomiKisomi Jan 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
NO IT'S NOT QAQ
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:iconashpyr:
Ashpyr Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
DO NOT LIE YES IT IS
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Everglaves Jan 7, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
the eyes looks so pretty :)
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MikomiKisomi Jan 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you~! <3
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Everglaves Jan 8, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
your welcomed :)
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:iconchibistalker:
Due seriously where do you get such great ideas for clothing?!:iconimadplz:
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MikomiKisomi Jan 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
idk but it's not great ;A;
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:iconchibistalker:
STFU YES IT IS
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lovelyrosethorn Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
cuteeeee
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